A reflection on the feedback you received from your last pitch: On the last Pitch I received feedback from two different people. It seems that while the presentation was good the fluidity and confidence behind it needed work. People liked how it sounded like a commercial rather than just a simple pitch. This is actually something I picked up by watching other people in my group! For the most part I one hundred percent agreed with the feedback and tried to revise my pitch accordingly.
What did you change, based on the feedback: For this pitch I actually wrote an outline as well as dress more professionally. I think these factors helped it come off as more streamlined and I felt more confident. At this point I'm pretty certain I know what I'm selling and the message that I'm trying to convey.
Hey Mohamed,
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