Thursday, July 4, 2019
Elevator Pitch Practice! (Part 2!)
A reflection on the feedback I received from the last pitch: On the last pitch I only received 1 comment and it was mostly positive, speaking on the service itself. Overall it seemed like my explanation and delivery were solid.
What I changed: On this go I tried to make the pitch more like a commercial as well as kept it more concise and understandable. I didn't give as much background information, used my hands more, and was standing up.
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I like how your presentation was clear and concise. I clearly understood the information in your presentation. Your professional appearance helped the presentation. I feel like you included the necessary information for us to believe in your idea.
ReplyDeleteHey Mohamed,
ReplyDeleteI think your idea and product are good and the way you explained how it works is clear to understand. I also read that you changed some elements of the first pitch and I liked it how now you made it sound more like a commercial than a simple explanation, I think this was a great improvement. However, maybe you could practice your speech a little more in front of the mirror so that you could feel and sound more self-confident. It would really help the fluidity of your pitch.